自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly, then add one clear detail about how often or where you rode. Avoid repeating “when I was a child,” and use the natural phrase “ride my bike” rather than “bike.” Check singular and plural forms: say “a bike” or “many bikes,” not “many of it.”

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my village, especially after school. It was a fun way to explore the area.

建議: Give a direct answer and support it with a specific observation. Use “bikes are popular” to match the plural subject, and say “ride bikes” rather than “write them.” Organize your examples clearly—for instance, mention people riding in towns and students cycling to school. Avoid the unclear ending “or even the student.”

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. I often see people riding them on the roads, especially in my village. Many students also cycle to school because it is convenient and inexpensive.

× I had many of it.

✓ I had many of them.

Many is used with plural countable nouns, so the pronoun referring to bikes must also be plural: them, not it.

× I used to bike for in bike in my village so often.

✓ I used to ride my bike in my village very often.

For does not fit this expression, and in should not be used before bike in this context. Use ride my bike and in my village. Place very often at the end for a more natural sentence.

× Usually when I was a child.

✓ I usually rode my bike in my village.

This is a sentence fragment because it does not have a main clause. Combine the time expression with a complete clause. Since the speaker is describing a repeated past action, rode is appropriate.

× It is so popular and well known in my country.

✓ They are so popular and well known in my country.

The pronoun refers to bikes, which is plural. Use they rather than it.

× It is so popular and well known in my country.

✓ They are so popular and well known in my country.

The subject bikes is plural, so it requires the plural verb are, not is.

× I always see many people write them in the road and in my village also, or even the student.

✓ I always see many people write them on the road, in my village too, or even students.

Use on the road when referring to a road surface. Also sounds more natural as too at the end of this phrase. These changes correct the preposition and its placement.

× or even the student.

✓ or even students.

The sentence refers generally to people who use bikes, so the plural students is more appropriate than the singular student.