自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你直接回答了问题，也表达了对自行车的喜爱。注意关系从句中的代词重复：应说“a bike that my mom bought for me”，不能在“that”后再加“it”。可以补充一两个具体细节，例如自行车的颜色、你常骑车去哪里，或你为什么喜欢它，使回答更具体自然。

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mom bought me a small red one, and I loved riding it around our neighborhood after school.

建議: 回答中的观点不够清楚：“I don't think bike”语法不完整，而且“自行车不流行”和“很多人更喜欢骑电动车”之间的关系需要说明。可直接表达传统自行车是否流行，再用电动车作对比并解释原因。删除与问题关系不大的“I'm a Cantonese”和重复的“you know”；注意说“bikes”或“cycling”，以及“electric bikes/e-bikes”。

範例: Traditional bikes aren't very popular where I live because many people prefer electric bikes. They're more convenient for commuting, especially when people need to travel longer distances. However, some people still ride regular bikes for exercise.

× When I was a child I did have a bike which my mom bought it for me.

✓ When I was a child, I did have a bike that my mom bought for me.

关系代词 that/which 已经在定语从句中充当 bought 的宾语，因此不能再加 it，否则会重复指代。可以说 “a bike that my mom bought for me”，也可以说 “a bike which my mom bought for me”。

× I don't think bike, it's really popular in my country,

✓ I don't think bikes are really popular in my country.

这里是在泛指自行车，应使用复数 bikes。修改后，bikes 是复数主语，因此谓语也要用 are。表达“我认为自行车在我的国家并不流行”时，可以使用 “I don't think bikes are really popular”。

× A lot of people prefer to ride E bike, you know, so it's because it's more convenient.

✓ A lot of people prefer to ride e-bikes because they are more convenient.

这里泛指许多人骑的电动自行车，应使用复数 e-bikes，而不是单数 E bike。后面的代词和 be 动词也应与复数 e-bikes 一致，因此用 they are。