自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly using the past tense: “No, I didn’t.” Then explain your reason in one clear sentence. The current answer has several grammar problems, including “I don’t have” instead of “I didn’t have,” and the explanation about the law is difficult to understand. Clarify whether you mean a bicycle or a motorbike, since the rules may differ.

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family thought I needed a licence to ride one, so I never got one.

建議: Give a clear opinion about popularity rather than saying bikes are “important.” Avoid repeating “use it,” and use natural phrases such as “people use bikes” or “for short trips.” Add a specific reason or example to support your answer.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially for short trips. Many people ride them to work or to run errands because they’re convenient and affordable.

× When I was young I don't have a bike because the law the if you don't have a license it will be illegal if you use the bike.

✓ When I was young, I didn't have a bike because it was illegal to ride one without a license.

The sentence refers to a time in the past, so use the past-tense form didn't have instead of don't have. Keep the explanation of the law in the past as well: it was illegal.

× When I was young I don't have a bike because the law the if you don't have a license it will be illegal if you use the bike.

✓ When I was young, I didn't have a bike because it was illegal to ride one without a license.

The phrase because the law the if does not form a grammatical clause, and the conditional information is repeated awkwardly. Use a clear structure such as because it was illegal to ride one without a license.

× Generally it's really important in my country because when the people go somewhere, we almost use the bike or we use it.

✓ Generally, bikes are really important in my country because people use them to get around.

The answer is about bikes in general, so use the plural noun bikes and the matching plural verb are. Use the plural pronoun them to refer back to bikes.

× Generally it's really important in my country because when the people go somewhere, we almost use the bike or we use it.

✓ Generally, bikes are really important in my country because people use them to get around.

When speaking about people in general, do not use the before people. The definite article would suggest a specific group of people.