自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答内容不够清楚，语法也有问题。请直接说明小时候有没有自行车；如果有，再补充是谁在什么时候送的。注意用 “gave me a bike for my birthday” 表达“在生日时送我一辆自行车”。

範例: Yes, I did. My aunt gave me a bike for my birthday when I was eight, and I used to ride it around my neighbourhood.

建議: 观点明确，也给出了原因，但有几处语法问题：“a very popular” 应改为 “very popular”，“use bikes go” 应改为 “use bikes to go”。可以补充一个具体场景，并用连接词让表达更自然。

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. Many people ride them to work or school because they’re convenient and help them avoid traffic.

× Here Imante gave me a bike Imante's birthday.

✓ Here, Imante gave me a bike on Imante's birthday.

表示“在某人的生日那天”时，通常在具体日期或节日等时间前使用介词“on”。原句在“Imante's birthday”前缺少介词。建议记住表达“on someone's birthday”。

× Yeah, I think bikes are a very popular in my country because a lot of people will use bikes go to work or school.

✓ Yeah, I think bikes are very popular in my country because a lot of people will use bikes to go to work or school.

“popular”是形容词，句中没有名词需要冠词“a”修饰，因此应删除“a”，说“bikes are very popular”。建议注意“be + 形容词”结构中，形容词前通常不加冠词。

× Yeah, I think bikes are a very popular in my country because a lot of people will use bikes go to work or school.

✓ Yeah, I think bikes are very popular in my country because a lot of people will use bikes to go to work or school.

“use bikes go”缺少连接“use bikes”和表示目的的动作“go”的结构成分。表示“用自行车去做某事”时，应使用“use bikes to go”。建议记住“use something to do something”的结构。