自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答切题，也补充了父亲买车这一具体细节。注意时态和动词形式：这里可用“I remember”或“I remember clearly”，而“buy”的过去式是“bought”，不是“buyed”。“Of course”略显多余，可以直接回答。建议再补充一个简单细节，例如自行车的颜色或你骑车时的感受。

範例: Yes, I did. I remember clearly that my father bought me my first bike when I was about seven. It was bright red, and I loved riding it around our neighbourhood.

建議: 观点明确，并用扫码租车说明了自行车受欢迎的原因，内容具体实用。词组“public use bike”不自然，建议改为“shared bikes”或“public bikes”；“a lot of”后要用复数。原句连接较长，可用“because”或“for example”组织信息，并避免重复使用“you”。

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in China, especially shared bikes in cities. People can unlock one by scanning a QR code, which makes short trips quick and convenient. They’re also a practical way to avoid traffic.

× I vividly remembered that my father buyed my first bike.

✓ I vividly remembered that my father bought my first bike.

这里描述的是过去发生的事情，动词需要使用过去式。buy 是不规则动词，过去式是 bought，而不是 buyed。

× Yes, I come from China and in my country we have a lot of public use bike and you just need to scan the QR code then you can use it.

✓ Yes, I come from China, and in my country we have a lot of public-use bikes. You just need to scan the QR code, and then you can use one.

a lot of 后面应接可数名词的复数形式，因此 bike 应改为 bikes。另外，前文说有很多辆车，后文用 one 指其中任意一辆，比单数 it 更合适。