自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly, then add the birthday detail and explain why the bike was special. Use natural phrasing such as “my uncle gave it to me” and “it had a sticker of my favourite cartoon.” Avoid “I was having” and “most favourite,” which are unnatural or redundant. Break the long answer into shorter sentences.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My uncle gave it to me for my fifth birthday, and it had a sticker of my favourite cartoon character on it. I loved that bike because the sticker made it feel special.

建議: Give a clear answer and support it with one or two relevant reasons. Say “the roads are poorly maintained” and “parents worry about their children’s safety.” The final comparison with strollers is unclear because strollers are not an alternative to bikes for most people; explain what you mean or replace it with a relevant alternative, such as cars or public transport. Avoid fillers and repeated words.

範例: No, bicycles aren’t very popular in my country. Many roads are poorly maintained, so cycling can feel unsafe, especially for children. As a result, families often prefer to travel by car or public transport.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and it was gifted by my uncle on my 5th birthday and I was having the sticker of my most favorite cartoon and that was the reason why I loved that bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My uncle gave it to me for my fifth birthday, and it had a sticker of my favorite cartoon, which is why I loved it.

Use the simple past had to describe possession. Have is generally not used in the progressive form when it means possession, so I was having a sticker is incorrect in this context. Say I had a sticker.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and it was gifted by my uncle on my 5th birthday and I was having the sticker of my most favorite cartoon and that was the reason why I loved that bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My uncle gave it to me for my fifth birthday, and it had a sticker of my favorite cartoon, which is why I loved it.

Favorite already expresses that something is preferred over other choices, so most favorite is redundant. Use favorite.

× No, I think bikes are not that popular in my country because the roads are not well constructed and also uh, parents are really strict when it comes to their child safety. So instead of that, stroller is really popular in in my country.

✓ No, I think bikes are not that popular in my country because the roads are not well constructed, and parents are also really strict when it comes to their children's safety. So, instead, strollers are really popular in my country.

When referring to strollers as a general category, use the plural noun strollers. The plural subject also takes the plural verb are. Their children's safety is a natural way to refer to the safety of the children of multiple parents.