自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ответ дан по теме, и перечисление цветов добавляет конкретную деталь. Однако конструкция «I had got» здесь звучит неестественно: используйте «I had». Разделите длинное предложение на два, добавив связку, например «They were…».

範例: Yes, I had three bikes when I was a child. They were red, green, and blue, and I enjoyed riding them around my neighborhood.

建議: Ответ начинается прямо, но объяснение можно сделать точнее. Вместо обобщения «our students always» используйте более естественное «many students», а для общего значения скажите «by bike», а не «on the bike». Добавьте конкретную причину или пример, чтобы лучше обосновать мнение.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many students ride them to school or university because they are affordable and convenient, especially for short journeys.

× Well, when I was a child I had got three bikes one was red, another was green and another was blue.

✓ Well, when I was a child, I had three bikes: one was red, another was green, and the other was blue.

Had got usually describes acquiring something or is used as the past perfect, which normally needs another past event as a reference point. Here, the student is describing ownership during childhood, so the simple past had is appropriate.

× Well, when I was a child I had got three bikes one was red, another was green and another was blue.

✓ Well, when I was a child, I had three bikes: one was red, another was green, and the other was blue.

The original sentence joins two independent clauses without punctuation: I had got three bikes and one was red. Use a colon to introduce the description of the bikes, and commas to separate the items in the list.

× Yes, because our students always get to school or to university on the bike

✓ Yes, because our students always get to school or university by bike.

The definite article the suggests a particular bike, but the student is speaking about bicycles as a general means of transport. Use by bike to describe the general method of transportation. The article is also unnecessary before university in this general reference.