自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly, then add one or two clear details. Use articles and possessives correctly: say “a purple bicycle,” “ride my bicycle,” and “my family.” The phrase “Its ment” is unclear; use “It reminds me of…” Avoid repeating or correcting yourself mid-sentence, and specify where you rode.

範例: Yes, I had a purple bicycle when I was a child, and I loved it. It reminds me of my childhood because I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my family.

建議: Your opinion and reason are clear, but the answer is one long sentence and repeats “drive.” Use parallel phrasing (“driving a car rather than riding a bike”) and split the explanation into shorter sentences. Add a specific detail, such as busy roads or a lack of bike lanes, to support your point.

範例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. Many people prefer driving because it is more convenient, especially for longer journeys. Also, cycling can feel unsafe for children on busy roads where some drivers don’t pay enough attention.

× It was purple bicycle and I loved it so much.

✓ It was a purple bicycle, and I loved it so much.

Use the indefinite article a before the singular countable noun bicycle. Singular countable nouns generally need an article or another determiner.

× I rode bicycle with my families around the world around the neighborhood sorry.

✓ I rode a bicycle with my family around the neighborhood.

Use a before the singular countable noun bicycle. The corrected version also removes the repeated phrase and the self-correction so the sentence expresses the intended location clearly.

× I rode bicycle with my families around the world around the neighborhood sorry.

✓ I rode a bicycle with my family around the neighborhood.

Family normally refers to one family here, so use the singular family rather than families. Use the plural only when referring to more than one family.

× I don't think so because in my country people prefer to drive a car rather than riding a bicycle and it's a bit dangerous for children because some drivers drive their car unsafely and it's concerning

✓ I don't think so because in my country people prefer to drive a car rather than ride a bicycle, and it's a bit dangerous for children because some drivers drive their cars unsafely, which is concerning.

The verb forms should be parallel after rather than. Since the sentence uses prefer to drive, use ride rather than riding. The correction also uses cars to agree with the plural subject drivers.

× I don't think so because in my country people prefer to drive a car rather than riding a bicycle and it's a bit dangerous for children because some drivers drive their car unsafely and it's concerning

✓ I don't think so because in my country people prefer to drive a car rather than ride a bicycle, and it's a bit dangerous for children because some drivers drive their cars unsafely, which is concerning.

The plural noun drivers refers to multiple people, so the possessive determiner should refer to multiple cars: their cars. Use the singular car only when referring to one car.