自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答“有”，并准确使用 bike（自行车），避免把 bike 说成 bag。接着说明你想要自行车的原因，例如朋友都有自行车、你想和他们一起骑车。注意过去时：用 had、wanted、begged；表达“和朋友出去骑车”可以说 ride around with my friends。

範例: Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child. I really wanted one because many of my friends had bikes, and I wanted to ride around with them.

建議: 开头直接回答 bikes 是否受欢迎，并用 they 指代 bikes，不要用 he。把理由说得简洁、具体：自行车适合短途出行、容易骑，而且通常不需要驾照。注意使用形容词 convenient，而不是副词 conveniently；避免重复和未完成的句子。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. They’re convenient for short trips and easy to ride. Also, you don’t need a driving licence to use one.

× Yes, I hide her.

✓ Yes, I had one.

问题：hide 是动词原形/现在时形式，而问题询问的是童年经历，应使用过去时。建议记住 have 的过去式是 had。

× Yes, I hide her.

✓ Yes, I had one.

这里用 her 指代自行车不自然；her 通常指女性。可用 one 代替前面提到的单数事物 bike。

× because my friends they had bags

✓ because my friends had bags

my friends 已经是句子的主语，后面再加 they 会造成主语重复。删除 they 即可。

× so that I want one

✓ and I wanted one

整段描述的是童年时发生的事情，因此 want 应使用过去式 wanted。另外，这里用 and 连接“朋友有袋子”和“我也想要一个”更合适。

× one to riding by go out with my friend

✓ one to ride when I went out with my friend

to 后面应接动词原形，所以 riding 应改为 ride。表达外出时骑车可说 ride when I went out；by go out 不是正确的动词结构。

× Yes, I think he's popular

✓ Yes, I think they are popular

这里谈论的是复数 bikes，不能用 he 指代。应使用 they；对应的 be 动词也要用 are。

× bikes are more conveniently to drive to riding

✓ bikes are more convenient to ride

be 动词后描述 bikes 的特点应使用形容词 convenient，而不是副词 conveniently。表达“骑起来更方便”可说 more convenient to ride。

× when we want to go somewhere than not too not too far

✓ when we want to go somewhere that is not too far

原句中的 than 没有构成完整、清楚的比较结构，而且 not too 重复。可改为 somewhere that is not too far，意思是“去一个不太远的地方”。

× We don't need a license for riding bike.

✓ We don't need a license to ride a bike.

bike 是单数可数名词，前面需要冠词 a。表达“骑自行车”也可以说 to ride a bike。