自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer the question directly, then explain the reason clearly. The phrase “I had my bike when I was a teenager” conflicts with your opening “No,” so clarify that you did not have one as a child but got one later. Replace the unclear phrase “write a bike like to riding somewhere” with a natural expression such as “go for a bike ride.” Finish your thought instead of ending with “They were so,” and use a linking word such as “because” to connect your reason.

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I got one as a teenager, but I didn’t have many safe places to ride near my home. Still, I sometimes wished I could go cycling with the other teenagers in my neighborhood.

建議: Give a clear answer first, such as “They aren’t very popular in large cities.” Avoid repeating “in the city” and “because,” and remove fillers like “but like” and the unfinished “so.” Support your opinion with one or two specific reasons, using a linking word such as “because” or “as a result.” You could also qualify your answer by noting that bikes may be more popular in smaller towns.

範例: Bikes aren’t especially popular in large cities in my country. There are many cars and frequent traffic jams, so cycling can feel unsafe. However, they may be more common in smaller towns, where there is less traffic and more space to ride.

× I really didn't want it to write a bike.

✓ I really didn't want to ride a bike.

The pronoun it is unnecessary here and makes the bike sound as if it is doing the action. Use want to + base verb to describe what you did not want to do. Use ride, not write, for traveling on a bike.

× I really didn't want it to write a bike like to riding somewhere.

✓ I really didn't want to ride a bike, like, to ride somewhere.

After the infinitive marker to, use the base form of the verb: to ride, not to riding. Use the -ing form after verbs or expressions that require a gerund, such as enjoy riding.

× because all cool teenagers in my neighborhood were riding.

✓ because all the cool teenagers in my neighborhood were riding.

The sentence refers to a specific group of teenagers in the neighborhood, so use the before cool teenagers.

× there's a lot of cars

✓ there are a lot of cars

Cars is a plural noun, so use there are rather than there's, which means there is. Match the form of be to the noun that follows it.

× there's a lot of traffic jams

✓ there are a lot of traffic jams

Traffic jams is plural, so use there are. Use there is with a singular or uncountable noun, as in there is a lot of traffic.

× you can get easily hit by a car

✓ you can easily get hit by a car

Place the adverb easily after the modal can and before the verb phrase get hit. This is the natural position for an adverb modifying the possibility of being hit.