自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly using the past tense: “Yes, I did.” Correct the tense errors (“did have,” “was,” and “felt excited”) and avoid repetition such as “the color… was color pink.” Add one clear, specific detail about riding with your cousins or friends. Keep the response to no more than five sentences.

範例: Yes, I had a pink bike when I was a child. I loved riding it with my cousins and friends after school. I fell off a few times and got some minor injuries, but that didn’t stop me from enjoying it.

建議: State your opinion once, and name your country naturally without repeating it. Replace fillers and unclear phrases with precise language. Support your answer with a relevant example, such as people cycling for exercise, commuting, or joining cycling clubs. Use a linking phrase such as “For example” to connect your detail to your main point.

範例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in the Philippines. Many people ride them for exercise, especially on weekends, and some join local cycling clubs. In cities, though, people may cycle less for commuting because of heavy traffic.

× I do have bike when I was a child

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

The question refers to your childhood, so use the past-tense verb had rather than do have. Use the past tense consistently when describing this past experience.

× I do have bike

✓ I had a bike

Bike is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article such as a. Use a before a singular countable noun when mentioning it for the first time.

× my the color of my bike was color pink

✓ the color of my bike was pink

My and the should not both determine the same noun here. Also, pink can describe the bike directly, so color is unnecessary before it. Avoid placing two determiners before one noun.

× I am so excited that time to use and play with my bike with my cousins and friends and also I experience injuries

✓ I was so excited to use and play with my bike with my cousins and friends, and I also experienced injuries.

The speaker is describing a childhood experience, so use was instead of am and experienced instead of experience. Use the past tense consistently when describing events that happened in the past.

× I am so excited that time

✓ I was so excited at that time

Use at before that time when referring to a specific point or period in the past. This is a common preposition pattern: at that time.

× in our country in our country is the Philippines

✓ Our country is the Philippines.

The original wording repeats in our country and does not form a clear sentence. Use a subject followed by a verb and a complement: Our country is the Philippines.

× we usually do riding a bike

✓ we usually ride bikes

Do is not needed before ride in this sentence. Use the base form ride after usually to describe a habitual activity. You can also use ride a bike when referring to the activity generally.

× there's some uh biker bike there's a club biker rats like that

✓ There are some biking clubs, such as Biker Rats.

Use there are with a plural noun such as clubs. There is, often shortened to there's, is used with a singular noun. Use are when introducing more than one club.