自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答直接，内容也有具体经历和感受。注意避免用逗号连接两个完整句子，可用 and 或句号；“away from house”应改为“away from home”。另外，“explored and relaxed”可以说得更具体，例如说明你探索了哪里，或为什么骑车让你放松。

範例: Yes, I did. I started learning to ride a bike when I was about five, and my father helped me practise in our backyard. Later, I often rode around the neighbourhood and explored nearby streets. I loved the feeling of freedom and peace I got from being outdoors and away from home.

建議: 先直接回答问题，例如“Yes, they are.” 后面的历史背景与问题相关，但有多处表达不清或用词错误：“repeat development”“board blades”“informable”“school of work”以及最后一句都需要修改。可以使用“rapid development”“ride bicycles”“an affordable and convenient way to travel”以及“school or work”等表达，并用清晰的连接词组织句子。注意回答要准确、自然，不要为了增加内容而使用不确定的词语。

範例: Yes, bikes are popular in China, although their popularity has changed over time. In the 1980s, many people rode bicycles because they were an affordable and convenient way to get to school or work. As a result, China was often known as a “kingdom of bicycles.”

× I started riding a bike when I was about 5, my father told me and helped me practice in our backyard.

✓ I started riding a bike when I was about 5, and my father told me and helped me practice in our backyard.

原句用逗号连接两个可以独立成句的分句，形成逗号拼接。可以在逗号后加并列连词 and，连接两个分句。

× It felt liberating and peaceful to be outdoors and away from house.

✓ It felt liberating and peaceful to be outdoors and away from the house.

这里的 house 指特定的房子（说话者的家），是可数名词单数，需要加定冠词 the。

× Many people would board blades because they were an informable and convenient way to travel to school of work.

✓ Many people would board blades because they were an informable and convenient way to travel to school or work.

这里是在“上学”和“上班”两个选项之间进行选择，应使用表示选择关系的连词 or，而不是 of。