自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答切题，也提到了自行车的类型和骑车时间。注意，“辅助轮”应说 **training wheels**，而不是 *chaining wheels*；“骑车”应说 **ride my bike**，不要说 *route rode my bike*。建议用两句清楚表达，并补充一个具体细节，例如骑车的地点或感受。

範例: Yes, I did. I had a bike with training wheels, and I used to ride it after school, usually around my neighborhood.

建議: 观点明确，也给出了锻炼、休闲和通勤等理由。不过，第二句重复了 *in some city/in some cities*，应删去重复部分，并在 **a convenient and cheap way** 中加上冠词 *a*。最后一句的年龄规定表达不够清楚；如果要补充法律信息，请明确说明规定适用于谁，并核实其准确性。回答可控制在三句以内，避免口头填充词 *uh*。

範例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them for exercise and leisure, and in some cities they are also a convenient and affordable way to commute. There are also age restrictions for young riders in some areas.

× Many people ride bikes for exercise and leisure and in some city and in some cities cycling is also convenient and cheap way to commute.

✓ Many people ride bikes for exercise and leisure, and in some cities cycling is also a convenient and cheap way to commute.

可数名词 city 与 some 连用时应使用复数 cities。原句中的 “in some city” 是多余的自我修正片段，删除后保留 “in some cities” 即可。

× Many people ride bikes for exercise and leisure and in some city and in some cities cycling is also convenient and cheap way to commute.

✓ Many people ride bikes for exercise and leisure, and in some cities cycling is also a convenient and cheap way to commute.

way 在这里是单数可数名词，前面需要冠词。convenient 和 cheap 都修饰 way，因此应说 “a convenient and cheap way”。

× But legally we can ride bike uh after 16.

✓ But legally we can ride a bike after 16.

bike 是单数可数名词，泛指骑一辆自行车时，前面需要加不定冠词 a。口语填充词 “uh” 不属于语法错误，因此在修改后的句子中省略。