自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly, then add one specific detail about learning to ride or how you used the bike. Avoid repeating the same time reference: “when I was a child” and “when I was a kid” mean the same thing.

範例: Yes, I had a bike as a child, and I loved riding it around my neighbourhood. My neighbour taught me how to ride, and after that, I often went cycling with my friends.

建議: Give a clear direct answer and organize your reasons with linking words. Use “ride bikes” or “cycle,” “use them for transportation,” and “an environmentally friendly way to travel.” Include a specific example, and keep the answer to no more than five sentences.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in Thailand, especially in parks and tourist areas. People ride them for exercise, and some use them for short trips because cycling is environmentally friendly and inexpensive. For example, you often see people cycling in public parks in the evening.

× They also use for transportation in eco way.

✓ They also use them for transportation in an eco-friendly way.

The singular countable noun way needs the article an here. Use the article before the adjective and noun phrase: in an eco-friendly way.

× They also use for transportation in eco way.

✓ They also use them for transportation in an eco-friendly way.

The verb use needs an object in this sentence. Use them to refer to bikes: use them for transportation.

× Because it's eco fairly and also save you money for the cost of living.

✓ Because it's eco-friendly and also saves you money on the cost of living.

Fairly is an adverb and does not correctly describe something as environmentally friendly. Use the adjective eco-friendly after it's.

× Because it's eco fairly and also save you money for the cost of living.

✓ Because it's eco-friendly and also saves you money on the cost of living.

The subject it's is third-person singular, so the verb in the coordinated predicate needs the third-person singular form saves, not save.