自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答是否有自行车，不要把 bike 和 bag 混淆。描述童年经历时使用过去时，例如“when I was a child”和“I had”。补充一两个具体细节即可；原回答后半部分表达不清，建议删去无法确定含义的内容。

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was a child. My father bought it for me, and I loved riding it around our neighbourhood.

建議: 明确说明 bikes 在你的国家是否受欢迎，并使用复数主语和一致的动词，例如“Bikes are popular”。接着用完整句子说明哪些人常骑自行车，以及受欢迎的原因；避免重复“in a country”和含义不清的表达。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children aged six to twelve. Many children ride them to school or around their neighbourhood because they are convenient and fun.

× When I were a child I have a bag.

✓ When I was a child, I have a bag.

主语是第一人称单数 I，过去时的 be 动词应使用 was，而不是 were。

× When I were a child I have a bag.

✓ When I was a child, I had a bag.

句子描述的是童年时期的情况，应使用过去时。have 的过去式是 had。

× Yes, of course it is very popular in a country.

✓ Yes, of course, it is very popular in my country.

这里说的是学生自己的国家，应使用 my country，而不是 a country。a country 表示某一个不确定的国家。

× In a country the age of between six to to twelve.

✓ In my country, children between the ages of six and twelve all have one bike.

原句没有完整的谓语动词，因此是句子残缺。可以补上主语 children 和谓语 have，组成完整句子。

× In a country the age of between six to to twelve.

✓ In my country, children between the ages of six and twelve all have one bike.

表示“在六岁到十二岁之间”时，固定搭配是 between ... and ...，不能说 between ... to ...。此外，表达年龄范围时可以说 between the ages of six and twelve。

× The children all have a single backs, so it's very popular.

✓ The children all have one bike, so they are very popular.

a 是单数限定词，后面不能接复数名词 backs。结合语境，表示每个孩子有一辆车时，可以说 one bike。

× The children all have a single backs, so it's very popular.

✓ The children all have one bike, so they are very popular.

前面谈论的是复数 bikes，因此后面用 they 指代，并搭配 are；it 和 is 通常指代单数事物。