自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer the question directly, then add one or two relevant details. Use the past tense consistently ("practised" and "loved"), remove fillers such as "uh," and finish your explanation instead of stopping at "because it." Avoid the unrelated phrase "Yeah, I am."

範例: Yes, I did. My dad bought me a red bike when I was a child, and I practised riding it every day. I loved it because it gave me a sense of freedom and helped me explore my neighbourhood.

建議: Begin with a clear answer, then give specific reasons or examples. Correct the grammar ("there are a lot of people who use bikes" and "to travel to work or school"), use plural "bikes," and remove the unclear ending. Link your ideas with a natural phrase such as "as well as."

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. Many people ride them to work or school because they are affordable and convenient. They are also a good way to get some exercise, particularly for short journeys.

× I practice riding it every day.

✓ I practiced riding it every day.

The answer describes a childhood experience in the past, so practice should be in the past tense: practiced.

× Yeah, I am.

✓ Yeah, I did.

The question uses the past-tense auxiliary did, so the short answer should use did as well. I am is present tense and does not match the question.

× I really loved my bike because it.

✓ I really loved my bike.

Because it introduces a dependent clause, but the clause is unfinished. Remove the incomplete clause, or complete it with a reason, such as because it was comfortable.

× Nowadays you are a lot of people using bike for traveling more for to work or study.

✓ Nowadays, there are a lot of people using bikes to travel, especially to work or study.

Use there are to introduce the existence of people. You are means that the people are the listener, which does not express the intended meaning. Use to travel to describe their purpose.

× Nowadays you are a lot of people using bike for traveling more for to work or study.

✓ Nowadays, there are a lot of people using bikes to travel, especially to work or study.

Bike refers to bicycles in general here, so use the plural form bikes. The plural noun agrees with the general meaning of the sentence.

× Moreover, it helps people to exercise uh, every morning and buys all one of the most common.

✓ Moreover, cycling helps people exercise every morning, and bikes are among the most common means of transportation.

The original sentence becomes incomplete and unclear after and buys all. The corrected version gives the two ideas complete clauses with clear subjects and verbs. Use a complete phrase such as among the most common means of transportation to finish the second idea.