自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答没有直接表达清楚，且“whenever trial”“my home is poorer”和“buy mobile”不符合这里的语境。请直接说明小时候有没有自行车，再用一个具体原因补充；这里应说“bike”而不是“mobile”。注意使用完整、自然的句子，并检查语法。

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family didn’t have much money, so we couldn’t afford one.

建議: 你表达了自行车在中国很受欢迎，也提到了共享单车，这是相关的具体例子。不过，“bikes is”应改为“bikes are”；“in China industry there has”表达不自然，可改为“there are many”。建议先直接回答，再用共享单车说明原因，并将品牌或名称说清楚，例如“Hello bikes”。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in China, especially in cities. There are many shared bikes, such as Hello bikes, which people can rent using a mobile app. They’re convenient for short trips.

× No, whenever trial my my home is poorer I don't have extra money to buy mobile.

✓ No, when I was a child, my family was poor, so I didn't have extra money to buy a bike.

“whenever trial”没有构成正确的从句，无法清楚表达“小时候”。这里可用“when I was a child”。此外，原句中重复的“my”应删除。建议按照“时间从句 + 主句 + 结果”的结构组织回答。

× No, whenever trial my my home is poorer I don't have extra money to buy mobile.

✓ No, when I was a child, my family was poor, so I didn't have extra money to buy a bike.

问题询问的是小时候的情况，因此应使用过去时。“is”应改为“was”，“don't have”应改为“didn't have”。描述过去的经历时，要确保相关动词都与过去时间一致。

× Yes, bikes is so popular in my country and in China industry there has a lot of Xiao Huang Che and Halo mobile.

✓ Yes, bikes are so popular in my country, and in China's industry there are a lot of Xiao Huang Che and Halo mobiles.

主语“bikes”是复数，所以动词应使用“are”，不能用“is”。建议先判断主语是单数还是复数，再选择相应的动词形式。

× Yes, bikes is so popular in my country and in China industry there has a lot of Xiao Huang Che and Halo mobile.

✓ Yes, bikes are so popular in my country, and in China's industry there are a lot of Xiao Huang Che and Halo mobiles.

表达“有很多……”时应使用“There are”，不能说“there has”。由于后面的内容表示复数，需用“There are a lot of...”。

× Yes, bikes is so popular in my country and in China industry there has a lot of Xiao Huang Che and Halo mobile.

✓ Yes, bikes are so popular in my country, and in China's industry there are a lot of Xiao Huang Che and Halo mobiles.

“a lot of”后面表示多个可数事物时，名词应使用复数形式。因此，“mobile”应改为“mobiles”。