自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你直接回答了问题，也尝试说明原因，但语法错误影响了表达：应说“when I was a child”，而不是“when I child”；描述过去的家庭经济状况时，应使用“my family was poor”。可以补充一个具体结果，例如家里买不起自行车。

範例: No, I didn’t. My family was quite poor when I was a child, so we couldn’t afford a bike.

建議: 你给出了否定回答，但第二句“It it's a 10”含义不清，无法说明自行车是否受欢迎。建议直接回答“是”或“不是”，再补充一个具体理由或例子，并注意使用完整、清楚的句子。

範例: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. Many people prefer driving or taking public transport, especially when they need to travel long distances.

× No, because when I child, my family is poor.

✓ No, because when I was a child, my family was poor.

“when I child”中缺少系动词。表示“当我还是个孩子时”应说“when I was a child”。建议检查从句是否包含完整的主语和动词。

× No, because when I child, my family is poor.

✓ No, because when I was a child, my family was poor.

这句话描述的是童年时期的情况，属于过去，因此应将现在时“is”改为过去时“was”。建议根据句子中的时间背景统一时态。

× No. It it's a 10.

✓ No. It's a 10.

“It it's”重复使用了主语代词“it”，造成句子结构错误。保留一个主语即可，改为“It's a 10.”。