自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答问题，再补充一两个具体细节。注意句子之间要用标点或连接词隔开；这里应使用“had a bicycle”，而不是“hide a bicycle”。还可以补充骑车的地点或感受，让回答更完整。

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small bicycle when I was a child, and I often rode it around my neighbourhood after school.

建議: 回答中已经给出原因，但要注意动词和词语选择：“ride bikes”表示“骑自行车”，“short trips”表示“短途出行”。请用连接词把观点和原因连起来，并补充一个具体场景，例如通勤或购物。

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, many people ride them to nearby shops or to work.

× Yes, I did I hide a bicycle I rode it near my home

✓ Yes, I did. I had a bicycle. I rode it near my home.

问题中的 hide 与前面的过去时间语境不一致，而且这里表达“有一辆自行车”应使用 have。have 的过去式是 had。回答过去发生的事情时，注意使用动词的过去式。

× Yes, I do, lots of people read them they are cheap and good for short traps.

✓ Yes, I do. Lots of people read them. They are cheap and good for short traps.

原句把几个可以独立成立的句子直接用逗号或不加标点连接，造成句子结构错误。应使用句号分开完整句子。