自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 質問を繰り返すだけでなく、子どもの頃に自転車を持っていたかを「Yes」または「No」で直接答えましょう。その後、乗っていた場所や頻度などを一つ加えると、自然で具体的な回答になります。

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends.

建議: 「人気があるか、ないか」を最初にはっきり答えましょう。現在の回答は文法や表現が不自然で、「大きな音」が自転車の音なのか、バイクの音なのかも分かりにくいです。自転車について答えるなら、利用される理由や人気の程度を説明し、理由をつなぐ表現（because、for exampleなど）を使いましょう。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. They’re an affordable and convenient way to get around, although some people avoid cycling on busy roads because of the traffic.

× Actually it's not because somebody goes has big sound so some people think it's noisy.

✓ Actually, bikes aren't very popular because they make a lot of noise, so some people find them noisy.

The phrase somebody goes has big sound combines verbs and clauses in an ungrammatical way, and the connection between the ideas is unclear. Use a clear subject and verb, such as bikes make a lot of noise. The revised sentence also directly answers whether bikes are popular.