自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly using a natural phrase such as “I had a bike” rather than the overly formal “I did possess a bike.” Use “bike lanes” instead of “biking lanes,” and add one specific detail about when or where you rode. The answer is clear, but it could sound more conversational and personal.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I usually rode it around my neighborhood, although I couldn’t use it very often because there were hardly any bike lanes.

建議: Give a clear reason for your opinion, but avoid “As I said before,” which sounds repetitive in this answer. There is also a subject–verb agreement error: say “there aren’t enough bike lanes.” Explain how limited bike infrastructure affects cycling, and use a specific example or contrast to support your point.

範例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country, especially in large cities. There aren’t enough bike lanes, so many people feel unsafe cycling in busy traffic and choose to drive or take public transport instead.

× There isn't enough bike lanes to support all of the cyclists that ride a bike on a daily basis.

✓ There aren't enough bike lanes to support all of the cyclists that ride a bike on a daily basis.

In a there-be construction, the verb agrees with the noun that follows it. Bike lanes is plural, so use aren't rather than isn't. Check whether the noun after there is singular or plural to choose the correct form of be.