自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答基本切题，也提到了自行车是父母送的，但有明显的语法和搭配问题。应说“when I was five”，而不是“when five years old”；“送给我”用“gave it to me”，而不是“sent to me”；描述过去持续练习，应使用过去时，例如“practised riding it for hours”。建议先直接回答，再补充一两个具体细节，并避免重复表达“很长时间”。

範例: Yes, I did. My parents gave me a bike when I was five, and I was thrilled to receive it. I practised riding it in our neighbourhood almost every day.

建議: 你提到了自行车在过去很受欢迎，但题目询问的是现在自行车是否流行，因此需要先明确回答当前情况。“Bike”应使用复数“bikes”；自行车不是人，不能用“he”；“transportation”在这里不自然，可说“a popular means of transport”。请补充具体原因或使用场景，并注意时态一致，例如用“used to be”描述过去、用“are”描述现在。

範例: Yes, bikes are still popular in my country, especially in smaller cities. They’re an affordable and convenient way to get around, and some people use them for exercise. However, in large cities, many people now prefer public transport or electric bikes.

× Of course, I received the bike when five years old.

✓ Of course, I received the bike when I was five years old.

“when five years old”缺少主语和谓语，导致从句结构不完整。应补上主语“I”和谓语“was”。建议检查时间从句是否包含完整的主谓结构。

× My parents sent to me as a gift.

✓ My parents sent it to me as a gift.

“sent”后缺少表示礼物的宾语代词。这里应使用“it”指代前文提到的自行车。建议使用“send + 物品 + to + 接收者”的结构。

× I will practice in long, long time when I received it.

✓ I practiced on it for a long, long time after I received it.

“will practice”是将来时，但“received”表示过去，且问题询问的是童年经历，因此应使用过去时“practiced”。描述已经持续的一段时间时，可以用“for a long time”。回答过去经历时，建议保持时态一致。

× I will practice in long, long time when I received it.

✓ I practiced on it for a long, long time after I received it.

表示在自行车上练习应使用“practice on it”，而不是“practice in it”；表示持续一段时间应使用“for”，而不是“in”。描述收到自行车之后发生的事情，用“after”比“when”更清楚。建议结合介词的固定搭配和具体语境选择介词。

× Of course, Bike is very popular in our country in old times like nineteen seventies, he is one of the most popular transportation in our country.

✓ Of course, bikes were very popular in our country in the 1970s; they were one of the most popular means of transportation in our country.

泛指自行车时通常用复数“bikes”。另外，“one of”后应接复数名词，因此应说“one of the most popular means”，而不能说“one of the most popular transportation”。建议记住“one of + the + 最高级 + 复数名词”的结构。

× Of course, Bike is very popular in our country in old times like nineteen seventies, he is one of the most popular transportation in our country.

✓ Of course, bikes were very popular in our country in the 1970s; they were one of the most popular means of transportation in our country.

“in the 1970s”指过去的时间，所以应将“is”改为过去式“were”。谈论过去某一时期的情况时，建议使用过去时，并确保句中相关谓语的时态一致。

× Of course, Bike is very popular in our country in old times like nineteen seventies, he is one of the most popular transportation in our country.

✓ Of course, bikes were very popular in our country in the 1970s; they were one of the most popular means of transportation in our country.

“he”用于指男性，不能指代“bikes”。此处应使用复数代词“they”指代自行车。建议确保代词与其指代对象在人称和单复数上保持一致。

× Of course, Bike is very popular in our country in old times like nineteen seventies, he is one of the most popular transportation in our country.

✓ Of course, bikes were very popular in our country in the 1970s; they were one of the most popular means of transportation in our country.

表示“20世纪70年代”时，通常说“the 1970s”，需要在年代前加定冠词“the”。建议记住表达年代时使用“the + 年代复数形式”，例如“the 1990s”。