自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答问题，再补充一两个具体细节。注意使用正确的时间表达“when I was a child”，并避免重复说“Yes”。“My favorite sport is biking”与过去是否有自行车的关联不够清楚，可以说明父母何时送你自行车，以及你如何使用它。

範例: Yes, I did. When I was about eight, my parents gave me a blue bike for my birthday. I loved riding it around our neighborhood with my friends.

建議: 观点前后有些矛盾：你先说自行车不受欢迎，随后又说电动自行车很普遍。建议明确区分普通自行车和电动自行车，并用具体原因支持观点。注意复数“bikes”、主谓一致“they don’t”，以及更自然的表达“are powered by electricity”。

範例: Yes, electric bikes are very popular in my country, although ordinary bikes are less common. Many people use electric bikes for commuting because they are convenient and require less physical effort. They are especially useful for short trips around town.

× Why was a child I

✓ When I was a child

这里想表达“当我还是个孩子时”，应使用“When”引导时间状语从句；“Why”表示“为什么”，不符合语境。还要按英语语序说“When I was...”，不能把“I”放在从句末尾。

× My favorite sport is biking and I really love it.

✓ My favorite sport was biking, and I really loved it.

问题询问的是小时候的情况，因此描述当时喜欢的运动和感受时应使用一般过去时：将“is”改为“was”，将“love”改为“loved”。

× I think bike is not popular in my country.

✓ I think bikes are not popular in my country.

这里泛指自行车这一类事物，应使用复数“bikes”，并与复数主语搭配使用“are”。

× there's more the most transport in my country is electric bike.

✓ The most common form of transportation in my country is the electric bike.

原句中“there's more”和“the most transport”结构混乱，无法组成清晰的句子。表达“最常见的交通方式”时，可以使用“The most common form of transportation”。

× It don't need force to bike.

✓ It doesn't require effort to ride a bike.

主语“It”是第三人称单数，一般现在时的否定形式应使用“doesn't”，不能使用“don't”。注意“doesn't”后接动词原形。

× It just used the electric.

✓ It just uses electricity.

这里的主语“It”是第三人称单数，描述自行车的一般特点时，动词应使用“uses”。在“does/doesn't”之外的一般现在时句子中，第三人称单数动词通常加“-s”。

× It just used the electric.

✓ It just uses electricity.

这句话描述电动自行车通常如何运行，应使用一般现在时。“used”是过去式，改为一般现在时“uses”。

× So I think it is the popular in my country.

✓ So I think it is popular in my country.

“Popular”是形容词，这里不需要在它前面加定冠词“the”。应说“it is popular”。