自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答直接，也补充了和朋友骑车去公园的细节。注意用词和语法：“ride by”不正确，应说“bike”；“when I was 7”前可用过去式“bought”；“on weekend”应改为“on weekends”。可以再增加一个具体细节，例如骑车时最喜欢做什么。

範例: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a small bike when I was seven. I used to ride it around the park with my friends on weekends, and we sometimes raced along the paths.

建議: 目前回答的意思不够清楚，而且“go walk walk by bike”不是自然的英语表达。先直接回答自行车是否普及，再说明人们骑车的原因或场景。注意在“Yes”后加逗号，并使用“ride bikes”表示“骑自行车”。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to work or school because they are an affordable and convenient way to get around. They’re also popular for exercise, especially in parks.

× My parents bought me a small ride by when I was 7 and I used to ride it around the park with my friends on weekend.

✓ My parents bought me a small bike when I was 7, and I used to ride it around the park with my friends on weekends.

“weekend”表示泛指每个周末时通常用复数“weekends”，因此应说“on weekends”。另外，“a small ride by”根据上下文应为“a small bike”；“ride by”在这里不能作“自行车”使用。

× Yes people also go walk walk by bike.

✓ Yes, people also go walking by bike.

表示“去做某种休闲活动”时，常用“go + 动词-ing”结构，因此“go walk”应改为“go walking”。句中的“walk walk”重复了，应删去一个“walk”。