自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答直接，但有几处表达不自然：表示喜欢自行车时用复数“bikes”或“cycling”；“borrowed one for my friends”应改为“borrowed one from my friends”；“practice my bike skills”可改为“practise riding”。建议补充一个具体细节，例如你在哪里骑车或练习骑车的感受。

範例: No, I didn’t own a bike as a child, but I really enjoyed cycling. I sometimes borrowed one from my friends and practised riding in the park.

建議: 你的主要观点可以理解为“自行车不太流行，因为人们更喜欢开车”，但“the bike is too tired”意思不清楚，且“people always like people usually likes”重复并有主谓不一致。建议先直接回答，再用“because”说明原因，并用具体比较说明人们为何选择汽车。

範例: No, bikes aren’t very popular in my country these days. Many people prefer driving because it’s more comfortable, especially when they have a long commute or need to travel with their family.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but I really liked bike and I borrowed one for my friends to practice my bike skills.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but I really liked bikes, and I borrowed one from my friends to practice my bike skills.

这里的“bike”表示一般意义上的自行车，通常要用复数“bikes”。另外，“borrowed one”中的“one”已经指代一辆自行车，因此不需要改动。

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but I really liked bike and I borrowed one for my friends to practice my bike skills.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but I really liked bikes, and I borrowed one from my friends to practice my bike skills.

“borrow”表示“向某人借”，借东西的来源要用“from”，所以应说“borrowed one from my friends”，不能用“for”。

× No, in these days the bike is too tired for people. People always like people usually likes to drive car on the way.

✓ No, these days, riding a bike is too tiring for people. People usually like to drive cars.

表示“如今”时，直接说“these days”，前面不加介词“in”。

× No, in these days the bike is too tired for people. People always like people usually likes to drive car on the way.

✓ No, these days, riding a bike is too tiring for people. People usually like to drive cars.

“tired”通常形容感到疲倦的人；形容骑车这件事“令人疲倦”，应使用“-ing”形式“tiring”。可以说“riding a bike is tiring”。

× No, in these days the bike is too tired for people. People always like people usually likes to drive car on the way.

✓ No, these days, riding a bike is too tiring for people. People usually like to drive cars.

“People always like people usually likes”重复了“People”，并把两个表达拼在一起，句子结构不清楚。保留一个完整、清晰的表达即可，例如“People usually like to drive cars”。

× No, in these days the bike is too tired for people. People always like people usually likes to drive car on the way.

✓ No, these days, riding a bike is too tiring for people. People usually like to drive cars.

主语“people”是复数，谓语动词要用原形“like”，不能用第三人称单数形式“likes”。

× No, in these days the bike is too tired for people. People always like people usually likes to drive car on the way.

✓ No, these days, riding a bike is too tiring for people. People usually like to drive cars.

这里泛指人们平时开汽车，应使用复数“cars”，而不是单数“car”。