自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly, then add one clear detail about how you used the bike. Use “gave me” or “bought me” rather than “gifted me” for a more natural conversational tone. Correct “most afternoon” to “most afternoons” and “write” to “ride”; also say “around the neighborhood” without a break.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought me one when I was ten, and I was really excited. I spent many afternoons learning to ride it around my neighborhood.

建議: Make your opinion clear by saying that bikes are not very popular, rather than saying “bikers” are not popular. Replace “write” with “ride,” remove the hesitation, and complete “for daily” with a phrase such as “for their daily commute.” You have a relevant reason; you could make the answer more specific by briefly explaining how traffic affects cyclists.

範例: Not really. Bikes aren’t very popular in my country because many streets are narrow and crowded, which makes cycling difficult and sometimes unsafe. As a result, most people use motorcycles or cars for their daily commute.

× I was really excited and spent most afternoon learning to write it around the. Neighborhood.

✓ I was really excited and spent most of the afternoon learning to write it around the neighborhood.

Most cannot directly modify the singular, uncountable time expression afternoon in this sentence. Use most of the afternoon. The period and capitalization within the phrase around the neighborhood have also been regularized. Write is not changed because choosing ride instead would be a vocabulary correction, which is outside the listed grammar types.

× As a result, most people prefer motorcycles or cars for daily.

✓ As a result, most people prefer motorcycles or cars for daily use.

Daily is an adjective here, so it needs to modify a noun. The phrase for daily is incomplete; adding use completes the phrase and makes the sentence structure grammatical.