自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你重复了考官的问题，没有直接回答。先明确说“有”或“没有”，再补充一两个具体细节，例如几岁开始骑、谁给你买的，或你通常骑车去哪里。

範例: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a small red bike when I was about seven, and I used to ride it around our neighborhood with my friends.

建議: 你表达了自行车对学生通勤很重要，但开头没有直接回答“是否受欢迎”，而且“As a student, bikes are everywhere from my perspective”不够自然。建议先明确回答“Yes, they are”，再用具体场景说明学生如何骑车通勤；注意说“on my daily commute”或“for commuting”。

範例: Yes, they’re very popular, especially among students. Many students ride bikes to school or to the nearest bus stop because cycling is affordable and convenient in busy areas.

× As a student, bikes are everywhere from my perspective and when on daily commute, bikes are very important for students.

✓ As a student, I see bikes everywhere, and they are very important for students during their daily commutes.

句首的“As a student”在语法上修饰主句的主语，但原句主语是“bikes”，造成修饰对象不当。应明确写出“I”，让“作为学生”的身份对应说话者。另外，“when on daily commute”结构不完整；改为“during their daily commutes”后，表达更自然、完整。