自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答问题，再按时间顺序补充细节。注意使用正确表达，例如“when I was a kid”“a pink bike”和“training wheels”。“It did let me have fun riding”表达不自然，可改为“I enjoyed riding it”；“as long as you have feet”不够准确，可说明有辅助轮让骑车变得容易。避免重复“I did”，并补完最后一句。

範例: Yes, I had two bikes when I was a child. My first one was a cute pink bike with training wheels because I was too young to balance on my own. I enjoyed riding it, although it was quite easy to use. Later, I got a bigger bike without training wheels.

建議: 回答时要对应题目中的“in your country”，可以先概括全国情况，再用所在城市的共享单车作为例子。将“In my point”改为“In my opinion”，将“commut”改为“commute”，并说“you don’t have to worry about traffic jams”。可以补充骑车受欢迎的原因，并用连接词使观点更连贯。

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. For example, shared bikes are widely available, and many people use them to commute or run errands. They’re affordable and environmentally friendly. They can also be a convenient way to avoid traffic jams.

× And so I did so I did usually

✓ And so I usually did.

原句重复了“so I did”，且“usually”放在句末使表达不自然。这里可将“usually”放在动词“did”之前，并删除重复部分。

× In my point, bikes are really popular in my city, especially now with shared bikes.

✓ In my opinion, bikes are really popular in my city, especially now with shared bikes.

表达“在我看来”时，英语中应使用固定搭配“in my opinion”，而不是“in my point”。

× And you don't really have worry about traffic gyms.

✓ And you don't really have to worry about traffic gyms.

表示“不得不／需要做某事”的结构是“have to + 动词原形”。原句中的“have”后缺少“to”，因此应说“have to worry”。