自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly, then add one clear supporting detail. Use the past tense “I got” rather than “I’ve got” when describing childhood, and say “on my commute” or “on the way to school” instead of “on my commute way.” Avoid fillers and make the final idea grammatically complete.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I rode it to school every day, so it became a trusted companion and made my journey more enjoyable.

建議: Give a complete answer and finish your explanation. Use “bikes” without “the” when speaking generally, say “on campus,” and make the subject and verb agree: “bikes and motorcycles are.” Add a specific reason or example, and reduce fillers.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in China, especially among university students. Many campuses restrict car use, so students often cycle between their dormitories and classes. Bikes are affordable and convenient for short trips.

× Well, yes, I've got the bike when I was a child and uh, uh, every day I rode this bike to school and it has been my, uh, greatest companion to uh, on my commute way.

✓ Well, yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and every day I rode it to school. It was my greatest companion on my commute to school.

The speaker is describing a finished period in the past, so the simple past is appropriate. Use had instead of I've got and was instead of has been. The present perfect is generally not used for events or states tied to a finished time such as childhood.

× Well, yes, I've got the bike when I was a child and uh, uh, every day I rode this bike to school and it has been my, uh, greatest companion to uh, on my commute way.

✓ Well, yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and every day I rode it to school. It was my greatest companion on my commute to school.

Commute way is not a standard phrase. Use on my commute to school or on my way to school. The preposition on is commonly used with commute in this meaning.

× The bikes are pretty popular in China, uh, especially for uh, college students because, uh, we are not allowed to drive, uh, cars in the campus.

✓ Bikes are pretty popular in China, especially among college students, because we are not allowed to drive cars on campus.

When referring to bikes generally, do not use the before the plural noun bikes. The definite article is used when referring to specific bikes already known to the listener.

× The bikes are pretty popular in China, uh, especially for uh, college students because, uh, we are not allowed to drive, uh, cars in the campus.

✓ Bikes are pretty popular in China, especially among college students, because we are not allowed to drive cars on campus.

The usual expression is on campus, not in the campus, when referring generally to an institution's campus. Use among rather than for to identify the group in which bikes are popular.

× So bike or motorcycle are the, uh, perfect, uh, way to.

✓ So a bike or a motorcycle is a perfect way to get around.

Bike and motorcycle are singular countable nouns, so each needs an article in this sentence. Use a before each noun when referring to either vehicle generally.

× So bike or motorcycle are the, uh, perfect, uh, way to.

✓ So a bike or a motorcycle is a perfect way to get around.

The subject presents two singular alternatives joined by or. The verb agrees with the singular alternative closest to it, motorcycle, so use is rather than are.

× So bike or motorcycle are the, uh, perfect, uh, way to.

✓ So a bike or a motorcycle is a perfect way to get around.

The phrase way to is unfinished because to needs to be followed by a base-form verb. Complete the thought with a verb phrase, such as to get around.