自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: You answer directly and include clear, specific details. For more natural phrasing, remove the unnecessary emphasis in “I did have” and use “I had.” You could also add a brief detail about where you rode or how the bike made you feel.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was pink and decorated with cartoon characters, and I used to ride it around the neighborhood after school. I especially liked it because it made me feel independent.

建議: Give a clear answer, then support it with a more balanced and specific explanation. Avoid the informal “’cause” and correct “old an old adults” to “older adults.” The claim that bikes are used only by children may be too broad, so mention other uses or differences between age groups if they apply.

範例: I’d say bikes are fairly popular in my country, especially among children and people who use them for exercise. However, fewer older adults ride them for everyday transport, partly because many people prefer cars or public transportation.

× It's rare to find old an old adults riding a bike.

✓ It's rare to find old adults riding a bike.

The article 'an' cannot be used before the plural noun 'adults'. The word 'old' is also repeated, so remove the extra 'an old'.