自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答，再补充购买时间、感受和使用场景，结构清楚。注意过去时：骑自行车应说“rode”，不能说“read”；避免“I I”这类重复。品牌如果是 Giant，可说“a Giant bike”。“my grandparents’ home”表示“我祖父母的家”。

範例: Yes, I did. My mom bought me a Giant bike when I was about seven, and I was thrilled when I got it. I rode it almost every day to my grandparents’ house.

建議: 回答观点后，用完整句说明原因，并具体解释天气和交通如何影响骑传统自行车。避免连续使用口语填充词“like”；“大家都开车、骑摩托车或电动车”可表达为“Many people drive cars or ride scooters and electric bikes”。“不受欢迎”不太自然，可改为“不太常见”或“不太实用”。

範例: Not really. Many people in my country drive cars or ride scooters and electric bikes instead. Traditional bikes are less common because the weather can be very hot, and the traffic is often too busy for cycling.

× I read it every day from my home to my grandparents home.

✓ I rode it every day from my home to my grandparents' home.

这里描述的是小时候骑自行车，应该用动词 ride 的过去式 rode。read 意为“读”，不符合语境。建议区分 rode（骑）和 read（读）的拼写与含义。

× Like everyone is driving their cars all scooters and electric bikes.

✓ Everyone is driving cars, scooters, and electric bikes.

原句中 cars、scooters 和 electric bikes 之间缺少清楚的并列结构，导致句子不通顺。列举多个事物时，应使用逗号分隔，并在最后一项前加 and。

× So like traditional bikes are not welcome in my country since the weather and the traffic.

✓ So traditional bikes are not popular in my country because of the weather and traffic.

since 通常表示“因为”时后接完整句子，不能直接接 the weather and the traffic 这样的名词短语。名词短语前应使用 because of。此外，表达自行车不受欢迎时，popular 比 welcome 更自然。