自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答问题，并统一使用过去时：把“have”改为“had”。“The bike is my parents bought for me”结构不正确，可说“my parents bought it for me”。接着补充一个具体回忆或用途；删除重复的“Time”，并注意回答控制在五句以内。

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me as a birthday present, and I used to ride it around our neighbourhood with my friends.

建議: 回答切题，也提供了原因，但“Almost every Chinese”过于绝对，建议改为“Many people in China”。注意主谓一致和时态：谈普遍情况可用“parents teach them”，也可用“are taught”。再补充一个具体例子，例如人们骑车通勤或使用共享单车，让内容更具体。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in China. Many people learn to ride when they are young, and cycling is still a convenient way to get around. In larger cities, people also use shared bikes for short trips.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

句子说的是“小时候”的经历，时间明确发生在过去，因此 have 应改为过去式 had。描述过去的事情时，要确保谓语动词使用相应的过去时。

× The bike is my parents bought for me

✓ The bike was bought for me by my parents.

原句把 is 和 my parents bought 两种结构错误地连在了一起。表达“自行车是父母给我买的”时，应使用被动语态：主语 + was + 过去分词 + by + 动作者。

× they hope I have a happy time

✓ They hoped I would have a happy time.

这里描述的是父母在过去买自行车时的想法，因此 hope 应改为过去式 hoped。表示过去的希望或愿望时，可以用 would 表示当时对之后情况的期待。

× Almost every Chinese can ride a bike because their parents will teach them when they were young.

✓ Almost every Chinese person can ride a bike because their parents teach them when they are young.

这句话描述的是普遍情况，应使用一般现在时。will teach 表示将来，与 when they were young（过去）不一致；此处应改为 teach 和 are。Chinese 作“一个中国人”时通常需要 person，因此改为 Chinese person。