自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答问题，再补充具体细节。注意“when I was 17”通常不属于童年时期；如果你想表达小时候，可以说“when I was younger”。“我爸爸给我买了一辆自行车”应说“my dad bought me a bike”。避免停顿词和句子残缺，确保表达完整、自然。

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was younger. My dad bought me a blue one for my birthday, and I used to ride it around our neighborhood.

建議: 直接回答自行车在你所在国家是否受欢迎，并说明原因或举例。“low oxygen country”与自行车受欢迎的原因不相关，可能是用词错误；请使用与话题相关的表达，例如“a convenient way to get around”或“a popular form of transport”。补全“people always like”后面的内容，并用连接词组织理由。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller cities. They’re an affordable and convenient way to get around, and many people use them for short trips to work or the shops.

× Yes, when I was 17, my dad, uh, by the bite. For me.

✓ Yes, when I was 17, my dad bought a bike for me.

这句话描述过去发生的事情，应使用一般过去时。这里应表达“我爸爸给我买了一辆自行车”，所以动词应为 buy 的过去式 bought。原句中的 “by the bite” 不是正确的动词表达；同时，“For me” 单独成句导致句子结构不完整，应与前面的内容合并。

× And of course my country is a low oxygen country and people always like.

✓ And of course, people in my country always like bikes.

“people always like” 中 like 后面缺少宾语，句意不完整。结合考官询问自行车是否受欢迎，可补上 bikes。可以直接说 “people in my country always like bikes”，使表达完整、自然。