自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答问题，再补充一个具体细节。表达“我看到很多中国孩子都有自行车”时，应说“many Chinese children had their own bikes”，不要说“most of Chinese children”；同时注意时态一致，谈童年经历时使用过去时。

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was a child, just like many of my friends. I often rode it around my neighbourhood after school.

建議: 目前回答中的关键词和句子不清楚，影响理解。可以直接回答“自行车在中国很流行”，再具体说明共享单车是什么、为什么方便。注意使用“shared bikes”或“bike-sharing services”，并避免重复或不完整的表达。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in China, especially shared bikes. People can unlock one with a phone app and ride it for short trips. They are convenient and easy to find in many cities.

× I saw most of Chinese children have their own bike in their childhood.

✓ I saw that most Chinese children had their own bikes when they were children.

“Most of”后面通常要接限定词，如“most of the children”；如果后面直接接名词，则用“most Chinese children”。这里应改为“most Chinese children”。

× I saw most of Chinese children have their own bike in their childhood.

✓ I saw that most Chinese children had their own bikes when they were children.

句子描述的是过去童年时期的情况，因此从句中的“have”应使用过去式“had”。可使用“saw that + 从句”来表达“看到／注意到某种情况”。

× I saw most of Chinese children have their own bike in their childhood.

✓ I saw that most Chinese children had their own bikes when they were children.

主语“most Chinese children”是复数，表达这些孩子各自拥有自行车时，用复数“bikes”更合适。注意“each child has their own bike”中也可以用单数“bike”，但这里的主语是复数群体。

× I saw most of Chinese children have their own bike in their childhood.

✓ I saw that most Chinese children had their own bikes when they were children.

“in their childhood”在这里表达不自然。可以改用“when they were children”（当他们还是孩子时），也可以说“during their childhood”。

× Well, in my country, Dear has a special bike named Shared sharing back equal. That is very useful back.

✓ Well, in my country, there is a special kind of bike called a shared bike. It is very useful.

表达“某地有某物”时，应使用“There is/are + 名词”，不能用“Dear has”代替。这里“a special kind of bike”是单数，因此使用“There is”。