自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答过去是否有自行车，并注意使用过去时：用“had”而不是“have”。“training wheels”是“辅助轮”，“brave enough to”后面接动词原形。避免重复使用“but”，再补充一个具体细节，例如自行车的颜色或你什么时候学会骑车。

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It had training wheels because I wasn’t brave enough to ride without them at first. I eventually learned to ride it on my own.

建議: 开头直接表达观点，然后给出清楚、具体的理由。“buy bike without me”意思不清楚；如果你想说自行车价格不贵，可以说“bikes are affordable”。注意复数形式“bikes”，并用一个具体例子说明人们如何使用自行车。删去句尾的“and yeah”，避免重复。

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they’re affordable and convenient. Many people use them to commute to work or school, especially for short journeys. They’re also a good way to get some exercise.

× Yeah, of course I always have a bike but And it was trade with the trading wheels because I'm not enough brave to played bike without the training wheels.

✓ Yeah, of course, I always had a bike, and it had training wheels because I wasn't brave enough to ride a bike without them.

这段回答描述的是童年经历，应使用过去时。把 “have” 改为 “had”，把 “I'm” 改为 “wasn't”。

× Yeah, of course I always have a bike but And it was trade with the trading wheels because I'm not enough brave to played bike without the training wheels.

✓ Yeah, of course, I always had a bike, and it had training wheels because I wasn't brave enough to ride a bike without them.

“but And” 连用了两个连接词，造成连接不当。这里用 “and” 连接相关信息即可；如果要表达转折，则只保留 “but”。

× it was trade with the trading wheels

✓ it had training wheels

“was” 后不能直接接动词原形 “trade”。根据上下文，表达“自行车装有辅助轮”时，用 “had training wheels” 更自然。

× I'm not enough brave

✓ I wasn't brave enough

“enough” 修饰形容词时通常放在形容词后面，因此应说 “brave enough”，而不是 “enough brave”。结合童年经历，使用过去时 “wasn't”。

× to played bike without the training wheels

✓ to ride a bike without training wheels

“to” 后面应接动词原形，不能使用过去式 “played”。此外，表达骑自行车通常用 “ride a bike”，而不是 “play bike”。

× almost everyone can buy bike without me

✓ almost everyone can buy a bike without me

“bike” 是可数名词单数，前面需要冠词。这里应加不定冠词 “a”。

× And a lot of people like bike and yeah.

✓ And a lot of people like bikes.

这里泛指人们喜欢自行车，应使用可数名词复数 “bikes”，而不是单数 “bike”。