自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Use past tense consistently when talking about childhood: say “didn’t have” and “didn’t allow.” Use “my parents” if you mean both parents. The answer repeats the idea that you were not allowed to ride, so give one clear reason and, if possible, a brief detail about what you did instead. “Take over on bikes” is not natural in this context; use “ride a bike.”

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child because my parents thought it was too dangerous for me. Instead, I usually walked or played with my friends nearby.

建議: Answer directly by naming your country, and use “back home” or “in India”—not “in my back home” or “the India.” Avoid the absolute claim “every single person”; “many people” is more credible. Organize the comparison clearly and explain that bikes are convenient for commuting or short trips. Use “bicycles” if you want to distinguish them from motorbikes.

範例: Yes, bicycles are very popular in India, especially compared with Canada. Many people use them to commute or go to nearby shops because they’re affordable and convenient for short trips.

× No, I don't have a bike when I was a kid because my parent doesn't allow me to ride any kind of bike.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a kid because my parent didn't allow me to ride any kind of bike.

The sentence describes a situation in the past, so use the simple past forms didn't have and didn't allow. Keep the verb tense consistent with when I was a kid.

× It's way more dangerous for a kid to ride a bike so they never allow me to take over on bikes.

✓ It's way more dangerous for a kid to ride a bike, so they never allowed me to take over on bikes.

The phrase refers to what happened when you were a child, so use the past-tense verb allowed rather than the present-tense allow. The comma before so also separates the two independent clauses.

× To have a bike in my back home is way more popular than in Canada.

✓ To have a bike back home is way more popular than in Canada.

Do not use in before back home. Back home already expresses the location, so adding in is unnecessary.

× Every single person has a bike of their own and the India because it is way more convenient and comfortable to travel to work or nearby grocery stores.

✓ Every single person has a bike of their own in India because it is way more convenient and comfortable to travel to work or nearby grocery stores.

Use in to show the location where people have bikes. And does not express location, and India does not take the definite article the.