自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Bạn trả lời đúng trọng tâm và có các chi tiết cụ thể về món quà cũng như thói quen đi xe đạp. Tuy nhiên, “of course” không cần thiết và câu đầu hơi lặp ý. Hãy sửa “my parents give me” thành “my parents gave me” vì bạn đang kể về quá khứ. Cụm “I always rode a bike in the morning” có thể diễn đạt tự nhiên hơn bằng “I used to ride it every morning”.

範例: Yes, I did. My parents gave me a bike for my fifth birthday, and it was probably the best present I received as a child. I used to ride it every morning, which was a fun way to stay active.

建議: Bạn nêu được hai lý do phù hợp: xe đạp có giá phải chăng và giúp mọi người khỏe mạnh. Tuy nhiên, “people are easy to get a bike” chưa đúng cấu trúc; hãy dùng “it is easy for people to get a bike” hoặc “bikes are easy to find”. Cần dùng dấu câu hoặc từ nối rõ ràng trước “besides”, và “improve the mood” nên đổi thành “improve their mood”. Có thể thêm một chi tiết cụ thể về những người thường đi xe đạp.

範例: Yes, bikes are fairly popular in my country, especially among students and people who live close to work. They are relatively affordable, and cycling is a convenient way to stay fit and improve your mood. However, many people still prefer motorbikes for longer journeys.

× It was a gift my parents give me when I was five years old.

✓ It was a gift my parents gave me when I was five years old.

The sentence describes a completed event in the past, so give should be changed to its past-tense form, gave. Match the verb tense to the past-time expression when I was five years old.

× Yes, I think that bikes are common in my country because they are very cheap and people are easy to get a bike besides, I think that riding bicycles is a good way for them to stay healthy and improve the mood.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are common in my country because they are very cheap and easy for people to get. Besides, riding bicycles is a good way for people to stay healthy and improve their mood.

People are easy to get a bike is incorrectly structured: people are not easy; rather, bikes are easy for people to get. Also, besides begins a new sentence here, so it needs sentence-ending punctuation before it. Use easy for someone to do something, and separate complete thoughts with appropriate punctuation.

× Yes, I think that bikes are common in my country because they are very cheap and people are easy to get a bike besides, I think that riding bicycles is a good way for them to stay healthy and improve the mood.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are common in my country because they are very cheap and easy for people to get. Besides, riding bicycles is a good way for people to stay healthy and improve their mood.

The mood refers to the mood of the people mentioned earlier, so use the possessive determiner their rather than the definite article the. Make sure possessive determiners clearly show who owns or experiences something.