自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你直接回答了问题，也提到了妈妈鼓励你骑车，但后面的表达有明显语法问题（“It's when I was a child...”）和不自然的用词（“afraid of the adventure”）。最后一句没有说完，影响完整性。建议用清楚的原因解释为什么没有自行车，再补充一个具体细节；控制在两到三句，并避免重复使用“so”。

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child because I was afraid of falling off. My mum often encouraged me to learn, but I never felt confident enough to try.

建議: 回答切题，并指出电动车比普通自行车更受欢迎，这是有用的比较。不过，“I'm from China”与“in my country”重复，“much more popular”也重复出现；“linebacks”用词不清楚，可能想表达“regular bikes”。句尾的“so”让回答显得未完成。建议直接说明中国的情况，并用一个具体场景或原因支持观点。

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in China, especially electric bikes. They’re convenient for short trips and commuting, so you often see people riding them in busy cities.

× It's when I was a child I was very umm, afraid of the adventure.

✓ When I was a child, I was very afraid of adventure.

原句中的 “It's” 使句子结构不完整且不自然。表达“我小时候……”时，直接用“When I was a child”引导时间状语从句即可，再接主句“I was...”。

× I think the bikes are really popular in my country.

✓ I think bikes are really popular in my country.

这里是在泛指自行车这一类事物，不是指某些特定的自行车，因此通常不加定冠词“the”。复数名词泛指时可以直接使用。

× In China there's some uh, electric bikes that are much more popular.

✓ In China, there are some electric bikes that are much more popular.

There be 句型中的 be 动词要与后面的名词保持一致。“some electric bikes”是复数，因此应使用“there are”，不能使用“there is/there's”。