自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答直接且提供了相关细节，但有两处明显的词语错误：“a kid's back”应为“a kids' bike”或“a children's bike”；“rule balance”表达不正确，可以说“keep my balance”或“ride without falling”。建议避免重复使用“I also remember”，并确保每个句子表达清楚。

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small bike when I was a child, and I often rode it around the neighborhood with my friends. I remember finding it quite difficult to keep my balance at first, but I gradually got better.

建議: 这段回答没有回应“自行车在你们国家是否受欢迎”，而是重复了上一题的童年经历；“Yes, I did”也不适合回答当前问题，应使用“Yes, I do”或“No, I don't”。请先直接表达看法，再补充具体原因或例子，并注意避免重复和不自然的表达，例如“how to how to scale balance”。

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller cities. They are an affordable and convenient way to get around, and many people also ride them for exercise.

× I also remember learning how to rule balance on it.

✓ I also remember learning how to balance on it.

“How to”后面应接动词原形。“Rule balance”中多了一个动词“rule”，使结构不成立。应删去“rule”，说“how to balance”。

× Yes, I did.

✓ Yes, I do.

问题使用一般现在时“Do you think…?”，回答时应使用助动词“do”来呼应，而不是表示过去的“did”。

× I also remember learning how to how to scale balance on it.

✓ I also remember learning how to balance on it.

“How to”重复了一次，而且“scale balance”无法构成正确的动词短语。删去重复和多余的词后，应说“learning how to balance on it”。