自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly and avoid restarting the sentence. Use the past tense consistently (“I didn’t have”) and say “when I was a child” rather than “at my childhood time.” Explain why you did not need a bike with a specific detail, such as having other ways to get around.

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My school was close enough to walk to, so I didn’t really need one.

建議: Give a clear answer, then support it with a specific reason or example. Use the plural “bikes,” and say “people need bikes to get from one place to another” instead of “everyone needs for a bike.” Avoid repeating words, and consider mentioning where people commonly ride them.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in busy cities. They’re an affordable and convenient way to get around, and many people use them for short trips to work or the shops.

× No, I have, I have.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a past time, so the present-tense form have does not fit. Use did not have to describe not owning a bike in the past. The repeated have appears to be a false start and can be omitted.

× I had no bike at my childhood time because they there were, there was no need for it.

✓ I had no bike during my childhood because there was no need for one.

Use during my childhood rather than at my childhood time. During is the natural preposition for an extended period. One can replace bike to avoid repeating the noun.

× because they there were, there was no need for it

✓ because there was no need for one

The there be construction should begin with there, followed by the correct form of be. They is an unnecessary false start here. Since the noun need is singular, was is correct.

× Yes nowadays bike is popular in my country because everyone needs for a bike for for going to one place to another.

✓ Yes, nowadays bikes are popular in my country because everyone needs a bike to travel from one place to another.

When speaking generally about bikes, use the plural noun bikes. The plural subject bikes also requires the plural verb are. Use a comma after the introductory word nowadays.

× Yes nowadays bike is popular in my country because everyone needs for a bike for for going to one place to another.

✓ Yes, nowadays bikes are popular in my country because everyone needs a bike to travel from one place to another.

The verb need takes a direct object, so say needs a bike, not needs for a bike. To express movement between locations, say travel from one place to another. The repeated for is an unnecessary false start.