自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答没有回应“小时候是否有自行车”，而且把“bike”说成了“back”，并使用了错误的疑问句形式。先直接回答“Yes, I did”或“No, I didn’t”，再补充一个具体细节，例如骑车的地点、年龄或感受。注意过去时表达“小时候”：用“when I was a child”。

範例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about seven, and I used to ride it around the park near my home.

建議: 你尝试表达“自行车很受欢迎”，但后面的理由不清楚，且“bags”应为“bikes”，“go to everywhere”应改为“go everywhere”。建议先明确回答“Yes, they are”，再用一个具体原因支持观点，例如自行车方便、经济或适合短途出行。减少停顿和重复，并确保代词和动词一致：bikes 是复数，使用“they are”。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they’re an affordable and convenient way to travel short distances. Many people use them to get to work or to run errands.

× Do you have a back when you are a child?

✓ Did you have a back when you were a child?

问题是在询问童年经历，因此需要使用过去时。一般疑问句中的“do”应改为过去式“did”；从句中的“are”也应改为“were”。

× Yeah, I think it's, uh, you'd because bags, umm is very interesting store.

✓ Yeah, I think it's, uh, you'd because bags, umm, are very interesting stores.

“bags”是复数主语，因此谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”，不能用“is”。

× Yeah, I think it's, uh, you'd because bags, umm is very interesting store.

✓ Yeah, I think it's, uh, you'd because bags, umm, are very interesting stores.

“bags”是复数，后面的可数名词“store”也应与其保持复数形式，改为“stores”。

× We, we can go to everywhere we want to go.

✓ We, we can go everywhere we want to go.

“everywhere”本身已经表示地点，不需要再加介词“to”。因此应说“go everywhere”，而不是“go to everywhere”。