自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答问题，再补充原因和未来计划。注意语法：应说“I don’t know how to ride a bike”和“That’s probably one of my biggest regrets”；避免重复“I don’t”，并用“so”或“as a result”连接想法。表达未来计划时可说“I hope to learn”。

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my parents never bought me one. As a result, I still don’t know how to ride one. I hope to learn someday, since it would be a useful skill.

建議: 开头回答明确，但后面的描述较零散，且有较多重复和填充词。用完整句说明你观察到的现象，并补充具体原因或例子；注意说“many people”而不是“most of people”，以及用“because”替代口语化的“cause”。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. I often see people riding them on the streets, especially in the mornings and evenings. Many people learn to ride when they’re young, usually with help from their parents or friends.

× I don't how I don't know how to ride a bike right now either.

✓ I don't know how to ride a bike right now either.

“I don't how”缺少动词“know”，而且后面又重复了“I don't know how”，导致句子结构不完整且重复。说话时可以删去错误的开头，保留完整表达：“I don't know how to...”。

× That probably one of my most drawbacks in my life.

✓ That is probably one of my biggest drawbacks in life.

句子缺少谓语动词。描述“那是……”时，需要在主语“That”和后面的表语之间加上系动词“is”。

× That probably one of my most drawbacks in my life.

✓ That is probably one of my biggest drawbacks in life.

“one of my”后面应接名词复数，但“most”不能直接这样修饰“drawbacks”。这里可用最高级形容词“biggest”修饰“drawbacks”，构成“one of my biggest drawbacks”。

× Yes, I believe bikes are very popular in my country cause, uh, in the street there are many bike riders every day I saw and I, I believe most of people when I, when they were little, their parents told them how to ride a bike.

✓ Yes, I believe bikes are very popular in my country because I see many bike riders on the streets every day, and I believe most people were taught how to ride a bike by their parents when they were little.

“every day”表示经常发生的情况，因此应使用一般现在时“see”，而不是表示过去某一次经历的“saw”。谈论人们小时候学骑车时，使用过去时“were taught”与“when they were little”保持一致。

× Yes, I believe bikes are very popular in my country cause, uh, in the street there are many bike riders every day I saw and I, I believe most of people when I, when they were little, their parents told them how to ride a bike.

✓ Yes, I believe bikes are very popular in my country because I see many bike riders on the streets every day, and I believe most people were taught how to ride a bike by their parents when they were little.

“most of”后面通常需要有限定词，例如“most of the people”。如果后面直接接泛指的复数名词，应说“most people”，不能说“most of people”。

× Uh, neighbors, friends.

✓ Neighbors and friends may have taught them as well.

原句只有名词，没有谓语动词，因此不是完整句子。可以补上动词，并将邻居和朋友作为句子的主语，例如“Neighbors and friends may have taught them as well.”