自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答切题，但时态错误较多：谈过去应使用一般过去时，如“had”“was”；“When I eight years old”缺少系动词，应说“When I was eight”；“I so much like it”表达不自然，可改为“I really liked it”。另外，“funny”通常形容好笑的人或事物，这里可用“fun”或“exciting”。建议补充一个具体细节，例如自行车的颜色或你骑车做什么。

範例: Yes, I had my own bike when I was eight. It was a small red bike, and I really enjoyed riding it around my neighborhood.

建議: 回答表达了自行车受欢迎的原因，但语法和表达不够自然。“bikes”是复数，应用“they are popular”；“go to everywhere”应为“go everywhere”；“they need the bike to instead of walk”可改为“they ride a bike instead of walking”。避免使用“everyone will”来泛指日常情况，建议用一般现在时。可以补充一个具体场景，例如人们骑车通勤或去附近商店。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially for short trips. They’re convenient and inexpensive, so many people ride them to work or to nearby shops instead of walking.

× Yes, I have my own bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had my own bike when I was a child.

句子描述的是童年时的经历，时间在过去，因此 have 应改为过去式 had。叙述过去发生的事情时，注意保持动词时态一致。

× When I eight years old I have my own bike.

✓ When I was eight years old, I had my own bike.

从句“When I eight years old”缺少谓语动词。描述年龄时应使用 be 动词，过去的年龄要说“When I was eight years old”。

× When I eight years old I have my own bike.

✓ When I was eight years old, I had my own bike.

这句话描述过去拥有自行车的情况，因此 have 应使用过去式 had。讲述过去经历时，注意将动词改为相应的过去式。

× It's so funny and I so much like it.

✓ It was so funny, and I liked it so much.

这里谈论的是小时候的自行车和过去的感受，因此 is 和 like 应分别改为过去式 was 和 liked。

× It's so funny and I so much like it.

✓ It was so funny, and I liked it so much.

“so much”放在“I”与动词“like”之间不自然。表达“非常喜欢”时，通常把“so much”放在宾语后面，例如“like it so much”。

× Yes, I think it is so popular because everyone will go to everywhere if it's not so far they need the bike to instead of walk.

✓ Yes, I think they are very popular because everyone will go everywhere if it isn't very far; they need a bike instead of walking.

“bikes”是复数，后面应使用复数代词“they”，不能用“it”指代。选择代词时要注意它所指代的名词是单数还是复数。

× Yes, I think it is so popular because everyone will go to everywhere if it's not so far they need the bike to instead of walk.

✓ Yes, I think they are very popular because everyone will go everywhere if it isn't very far; they need a bike instead of walking.

主语“bikes”是复数，因此与之搭配的 be 动词应为“are”，而不是“is”。主语和谓语动词的单复数形式必须一致。

× Yes, I think it is so popular because everyone will go to everywhere if it's not so far they need the bike to instead of walk.

✓ Yes, I think they are very popular because everyone will go everywhere if it isn't very far; they need a bike instead of walking.

“everywhere”本身可以直接作地点副词，不需要在前面加“to”。应说“go everywhere”，而不是“go to everywhere”。

× Yes, I think it is so popular because everyone will go to everywhere if it's not so far they need the bike to instead of walk.

✓ Yes, I think they are very popular because everyone will go everywhere if it isn't very far; they need a bike instead of walking.

“instead of”中的“of”是介词，后面接动词时应使用动名词形式。因此，应说“instead of walking”，而不是“instead of walk”。