自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答问题，然后按“自行车是什么样的—你为什么喜欢—你用它做什么”的顺序补充细节。注意统一使用过去时，例如用“had”“was”和“rode”；避免重复“I like it very much”，并修正“It's a very popular at that time”等语法错误。表达时尽量说清楚“bike”，避免含糊或重复的词。

範例: Yes, I did. My first bike was pink, and I loved it because it looked bright and cheerful. I used to ride it to school when I was a child.

建議: 用一句完整的主题句直接回答，并避免重复“bike is very / bike are very”和“especially”。补充一个具体原因或场景，例如学生骑车上学；最后要把句子说完整，不要停在“when they”之后。可用“because”“for example”等连接词组织内容。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among primary and middle school students. Many of them ride to school because it is convenient and affordable. You can often see groups of students cycling in the morning.

× It's a very popular at that time.

✓ It was very popular at that time.

“At that time”指过去的时间，因此应使用过去式“was”，而不是现在式“is”。另外，“popular”是形容词，前面不应直接加不定冠词“a”。

× It's a very popular at that time.

✓ It was very popular at that time.

“Popular”是形容词，后面没有名词时，前面不能用“a”。可直接说“was very popular”。如果要使用“a”，需要补充名词，例如“It was a very popular bike”。

× Umm this my first bike is a pink pink, so I really like it

✓ Um, my first bike was pink, so I really liked it.

原句的“My first bike”前多了“this”，导致结构不完整；“is a pink pink”的表达也不符合英语句子结构。可改为“My first bike was pink”。这里是在描述童年经历，因此使用过去式“was”和“liked”。

× I go to school.

✓ I went to school.

这句话承接的是“when I was a child”的过去经历，因此应使用“go”的过去式“went”。

× Bike is very bike are very popular in my country

✓ Bikes are very popular in my country.

这里是在泛指自行车，通常使用复数“bikes”；主语为复数时，谓语动词也应使用“are”。原句前半部分像是说话时的重复或自我修正，整理后可保留完整表达“Bikes are very popular”。

× I can, uh, watch a lot of students when they, uh.

✓ I can see a lot of students riding bikes.

原句以“when they”引出从句，但从句没有说完，因此句子结构不完整。可以补全意思，例如“I can see a lot of students riding bikes”。