自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer the question directly in the past tense: say whether you had a bike. Then add one clear memory. Use “rode my bike” rather than “ride my bicycle,” and explain what you mean by “down in the bike” (for example, that you fell off). Avoid repeated fillers such as “uh” and connect your details with “for example” or “once.”

範例: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child, and I have some fun memories of riding it. I sometimes rode it very fast, and once I fell off. Luckily, I wasn’t badly hurt, so I got back on and kept riding.

建議: Give a direct answer and clarify why bikes are popular. Use “cycling” or “bicycles are popular,” not “popular in Viking.” Explain who uses them and for what purpose, such as commuting or making deliveries. Use correct grammar, such as “some people find bicycles useful,” and reduce fillers.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Many people use them to get to work or run errands because they are affordable and easy to park. They are also useful for delivery workers, especially in busy areas.

× I have a bicycle.

✓ I had a bicycle.

The question asks about your childhood, so the answer should use the past tense. Use had instead of have.

× Bicycle and me very memorable moment.

✓ I had many memorable moments with my bicycle.

This is not a complete, grammatical sentence because it lacks a correctly formed subject and verb. Use a subject-verb structure such as I had, and say memorable moments to express the idea naturally.

× Sometimes I fast ride my bicycle.

✓ Sometimes I rode my bicycle fast.

The question is about the past, so use rode, the past tense of ride, rather than ride. Fast can describe how you rode.

× Sometimes, down in the bike.

✓ Sometimes I fell off the bike.

The original phrase is missing a verb and uses an unsuitable preposition. To describe falling from a bicycle, say fell off the bike.

× My country is very popular in Viking.

✓ Biking is very popular in my country.

The original sentence has an unclear subject and an incorrect phrase. Use biking as the subject and in my country to state where it is popular.

× Some people's are very useful, bicycle.

✓ Some people find bicycles very useful.

People is already the plural form of person, so it does not take an apostrophe or an additional plural ending. Use bicycles when referring to more than one bicycle.

× Some people's are very useful, bicycle because they are already, delivering, very easily.

✓ Some people find bicycles very useful because they make deliveries easily.

The original clause does not have a clear grammatical structure, and the relationship between people, bicycles, and delivering is unclear. Use find bicycles useful to express the idea that people consider bicycles useful, and make deliveries easily to describe their use.