自行车— Part 1 評分報告

練習Part12026-10-18 21:58:52

對話

Part 1

考官

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

考生

Yeah, I did have a bike when I was child.

考官

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

考生

Yeah, I think so by really are popular in my country

評估

總分

總分: 5.0流暢度與連貫性: 5.0發音: 5.0文法: 5.0詞彙: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

分數: 55.0

建議: Bạn trả lời trực tiếp đúng trọng tâm, nhưng cần dùng mạo từ “a” trước “child”: “when I was a child”. Để câu trả lời tự nhiên và đầy đủ hơn, hãy thêm một chi tiết cụ thể, chẳng hạn bạn bắt đầu đi xe đạp khi nào hoặc thường đạp xe ở đâu.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was a child, and I often rode it around my neighborhood.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

分數: 30.0

建議: Bạn đã nêu ý kiến, nhưng phần “by really are” không đúng ngữ pháp và khiến câu khó hiểu. Hãy nói trực tiếp “Yes, I think bikes are really popular in my country”, sau đó bổ sung một lý do hoặc ví dụ cụ thể, chẳng hạn xe đạp được dùng để đi học hoặc tập thể dục.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are really popular in my country. Many people use them to get around, especially students and people who want to exercise.

文法

22: Article errors

× Yeah, I did have a bike when I was child.

✓ Yeah, I did have a bike when I was a child.

The singular countable noun child needs an article. Use a before child when referring to one child in general.

12: Incorrect use of pronouns

× Yeah, I think so by really are popular in my country

✓ Yeah, I think so. They really are popular in my country.

By cannot function as the subject of the clause. Use the subject pronoun they to refer to bikes. Separating the ideas with a period also makes the sentence clearer.

重點詞彙

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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