自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答问题，再补充具体经历。注意过去时要保持一致：用“had”和“used”，而不是“use”；“back”应为“bike”。“I enjoyed the time”不够自然，可以具体说明你喜欢骑车的原因。避免句尾添加“yeah”。

範例: Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child, and I used to ride it to school every day. I really enjoyed the ride because it gave me a little independence.

建議: 观点明确，但原因表达有多处不自然。可以说“people enjoy riding bikes”或“people ride bikes to exercise”，而不是“enjoying to ride”“take some outdoor activities”或“exercise themselves”。建议补充一个具体原因，并避免重复表达自己也喜欢骑车。

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them for exercise or to enjoy the outdoors, especially in parks and along rivers. Cycling is also a convenient way to get around in some areas.

× When I was a child I had a back and I use it to go to school every day, so I enjoyed the time, yeah.

✓ When I was a child I had a back and I used it to go to school every day, so I enjoyed the time, yeah.

这句话描述的是童年时发生的事情，前面的“was”和“had”都使用了过去时，因此“use”也应改为过去式“used”，以保持时态一致。

× Yes, I do, because there are lots of people enjoying to ride a bike to take some outdoor activities and exercise themselves, so I also enjoy this kind of exercising.

✓ Yes, I do, because there are lots of people enjoying riding a bike to take some outdoor activities and exercise themselves, so I also enjoy this kind of exercising.

动词“enjoy”后面应接动名词（动词的 -ing 形式），不能接不定式“to ride”。因此应将“enjoying to ride”改为“enjoying riding”。