自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答童年经历时要使用过去时，例如用 “I had...” 开头。避免重复 “bike”，并检查不自然或意思不清的表达；如果想说父亲给你买了自行车，可以说 “My father bought it for me.” 再补充一个具体细节，例如自行车的颜色或你常骑车做什么。

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was blue, and my father bought it for me. I often rode it around our neighbourhood after school.

建議: 先直接回答现在自行车是否流行，并统一使用现在时。你的句子缺少标点，且 “hired a bike” 通常表示“租了一辆自行车”；如果想表达“骑自行车”，应使用 “rode bikes”。请把原因或例子分开说明，并使用连接词让回答更连贯。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students. When I was in middle school, many of my classmates rode bikes to school because it was convenient and inexpensive. Boys seemed to cycle more often than girls.

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

问题问的是你小时候有没有自行车，时间在过去，因此应将一般现在时 have 改为一般过去时 had。回答过去经历时，要确保动词使用过去式。

× I tell I have a bike bike.

✓ I told you that I had a bike.

这里是在转述自己告诉对方的话，应使用间接引语结构：tell someone that...。由于事情发生在过去，tell 应改为 told；转述的内容也与过去情境保持一致，使用 had。

× I really like it.

✓ I really liked it.

这句话描述的是小时候喜欢自行车，属于过去的经历，因此应将 like 改为过去式 liked。

× I think it was a little bit popular in my country in my middle school.

✓ I think bikes were a little popular in my country when I was in middle school.

这里谈论的是复数名词 bikes，用 it 指代不清楚；直接使用 bikes 更明确。相应地，be 动词应与复数主语 bikes 保持一致，使用 were。表达“我上中学时”应说 when I was in middle school，而不是 in my middle school。

× in my middle school

✓ when I was in middle school

要表达“我上中学时”，英语通常说 when I was in middle school。原表达 in my middle school 容易被理解为“在我的学校里面”，不能清楚表达时间。

× usually the boy

✓ usually boys

这里泛指通常骑车的男孩，需要用复数 boys。泛指一类人时，通常使用复数名词，而不是 the boy。