自行车— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
考生
Yes, I have a bad bike when I was a child. I learned to I learned to ride a bike with my mom and I think it's a warm and good memory.
考官
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
考生
Yes, I sure think mikes are popular in our country and I think in the world wipe are popular too. Yes, that's all.
評估
總分
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
分數: 48.0建議: 先直接回答问题，并注意讲过去的经历要使用过去时，例如用“had”而不是“have”。“I have a bad bike”表达不清楚，建议说清楚你是否有自行车；“I learned to”重复了一次，可以删去。最后可以补充一个具体细节，比如妈妈在哪里教你骑车，或你当时的感受。“warm and good memory”不太自然，可以说“a fond memory”或“a happy memory”。
範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mum taught me how to ride it in a park near our home. I fell off a few times, but I eventually learned, and it’s still a fond memory.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
分數: 38.0建議: 直接回答自行车在你们国家是否流行，并用一两个具体理由展开，例如自行车常用于通勤、锻炼或短途出行。注意“sure think”可改为“I’m sure”或“I definitely think”；“mikes”和“wipe”应为“bikes”，并留意发音清晰。避免重复表达“popular”，也不需要用“That’s all”收尾。
範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. Many people use them for short trips because they’re convenient and inexpensive. Cycling is also a popular way to exercise.
文法
× Yes, I have a bad bike when I was a child.
✓ Yes, I had a bad bike when I was a child.
句子中的时间状语“when I was a child”表示过去，因此“have”应使用过去式“had”。描述过去拥有某物时，使用“had”。
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