自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答是否有自行车，并确认你想表达的是“自行车”而不是“包”（bike，不是 bag）。之后用过去时说明是谁买的，再补充一个具体感受或回忆。注意表达“叔叔给我买的”应说“my uncle bought it for me”；“我很喜欢”可说“I liked it very much”。

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My uncle bought it for me, and I loved riding it around my neighbourhood.

建議: 回答方向正确，也给出了街上能看到自行车和共享单车的理由。建议先明确回答“Yes, they are”，再把理由表达完整；注意 bikes 要用复数，不能说“in my city's road”，可改为“on the roads in my city”。避免重复使用“around”，并用共享单车或通勤场景补充具体信息。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. You can see them on the roads in my city, and shared bikes are especially common because they are a convenient way to travel short distances.

× Yes I used to have a bag when I was a child and I remembered that it would my uncle body for me and I like it very much.

✓ Yes, I used to have a bag when I was a child, and I remember that my uncle bought it for me. I liked it very much.

“It would my uncle body for me”缺少正确的主谓结构，语序也不正确。根据上下文，如果想表达“叔叔给我买了它”，可以说“my uncle bought it for me”。“bought”是“buy”的过去式，符合童年时期发生的事情。

× Well, I think it is because you can see bike around in my city's road and there is a shared bike around the city.

✓ Well, I think so because you can see bikes around on the roads in my city, and there are shared bikes around the city.

这里是在泛指城市中常见的自行车，所以可数名词“bike”应使用复数“bikes”。同理，泛指城市里的共享单车时，也应使用“shared bikes”。

× Well, I think it is because you can see bike around in my city's road and there is a shared bike around the city.

✓ Well, I think so because you can see bikes around on the roads in my city, and there are shared bikes around the city.

“There be”结构中的be动词要与后面的名词保持一致。把“a shared bike”改为复数“shared bikes”后，be动词也要从“is”改为“are”。

× Well, I think it is because you can see bike around in my city's road and there is a shared bike around the city.

✓ Well, I think so because you can see bikes around on the roads in my city, and there are shared bikes around the city.

表示自行车在道路上时，通常用介词“on”，而不是“in”。可以说“on the roads in my city”（在我所在城市的道路上）。